Friday, December 4, 2009

The Will of Darkness, Part I

What parts of Northdale might have looked like before the Legion invaded


"Brothers, tonight everything we've worked toward will be ours. All the promises we've been given will be fulfilled. The glory to which we all aspire is within our grasp, but you must do your duty this night."
James Grekov leaned on the table in front of him, staring intensely at each of the men (and a few women) gathered before him. The Wolf's Tooth Tavern was packed, each person fully dedicated to the same cause as the one next to him. Well, James thought, almost everyone was so dedicated. Standing tall again, he continued his speech.
"There may be some with doubts. Our calling is to bring every soul in this land to our Master, willing or otherwise. Many are your friends, and some are your family. They do not, will not understand what it is we do for them. But you know, as well as I know, that all may partake in the great future promised to us.
"Some will resist, but we must not give in. Some will fight back, but we must not falter. Some in this room may even lose their life this night, but take heart, my friends: such are blessed to be able to taste the glory for which we all strive. Such are the luckier of us, for their fate shall be sealed soon."
James slowly began adding volume and intensity to his voice. "But to those who survive, though we all wish for the sweet taste of death, that we may then taste life, I say this: we must live, so that others may die and be reborn. This is our calling, this is what our Master would have us do!
By now, James was practically shouting, speaking with as much fervor and zeal as he could muster. "Death will come to us all, my friends, but not yet. First, we must do our Master's's will this night, and then we may stand ready for the reward which is promised. Are you ready?"
The walls of the packed tavern shook with cries of support and affirmation. James couldn't help but smile as he saw dozens of men and women just like him, people willing, even desiring to lay down their lives for their Master, though none, not even James, had ever seen him. Oh, James thought, he was real enough. James had felt his power, had felt his embrace when he traded his soul for the promise of immortality. Some others here had similar experiences, but most were going on faith that what was to happen tonight was the right course of action.
Well, James promised each one of them silently, your faith will be rewarded. And soon.
With a final word he dismissed everyone from the tavern, each person knowing his or her assignment. Tonight, James mused, they would spread across the land like the darkness they had come to love, and by sunrise, Northdale and its surrounding farms would be covered in the blood of those not willing to submit to the will of darkness. Yes, blood would flow tonight, and James would drink it in; he would glut himself in a show of devotion to the One whom he served.
As he followed the driven crowds out of the tavern, James failed to notice that not everyone had left. A tall figure clad in dark clothes slipped from the shadows into the kitchen, and outside through the scullery.

Thursday, December 3, 2009

Update

I think I've got a good thing going right now- I'm working on a few short stories to sort of flesh out the characters before diving into the big story (the details/plot of which I'm still turning over in my head). I should have part of one of the short stories up soon. I think you'll like it.

Wednesday, September 2, 2009

I Know, I Know, This is Getting Old

You ever find yourself starting over and over and over again in the creative process, waiting for that perfect line, that perfect beginning, that perfect twist?

Yeah, I'm there.

In my case, it's the beginning and what comes immediately after. So I offer, again, a snippet of a beginning, something that sounds good and hopefully stays sounding good. Let me know what you think.


Ebram strained against the pull of the current, so strong he felt as if his arm itself might tear away. His eyes half-closed because of the struggle, he saw his son Emon disappear beneath the swirling water for the third time, only to come back up a few moments later. Holding to Ebram's hand as tightly as possible, Emon sputtered and tried to cry out, but water kept filling his mouth every time he opened it.
Ebram tried to tell his son to keep his mouth closed, to fight against the current, to try and swim closer to the shore...and yet no sound came from his mouth. It never did. No matter how hard he tried to scream, Ebram could make no noise. He kept trying, of course, because his son, his only son, was close to drowning. But with each passing moment, his silence grew louder and his grip slipped a little more.
Somehow, Ebram knew how this would end. He got the feeling he'd seen this struggle, this battle for life, before, many times before even. Somehow, he knew that soon, some few seconds from now, Emon would slip beneath the raging river again, except this time he would not surface. Maybe it would be water filling his lungs, or maybe he would get caught on some unseen snag beneath the surface, or maybe the undercurrent was strong, too strong. Ebram didn't know, had never known, would never know what it was that shut his son's eyes for the last time.
He felt, in his mind and heart more than physically, his son's hand slip from his own. With a last desperate look, Emon disappeared from his father's view, his eyes giving Ebram a look that would haunt him until time itself ended. Ebram sat there, on the rock that jutted out into the water, panting and sweating, waiting for tears to come.
But they didn't. For some reason, Ebram felt the tears had stopped coming a long time ago. But where did that feeling come from?
From somewhere behind him, a loud noise seemed to shake the ground itself. Ebram turned to look....

Friday, August 7, 2009

Maybe a Prequel?

A farm in the Plaguelands, overrun by the Scourge

With a thud, Nikolas Tien crashed to the floor, helped by the two hulking figures who threw him there. They were shrouded in dark robes, their faces mostly covered. It was so dark in this room that their faces would have been hard to see even without the hoods. The figures moved to the doorway into the cell, taking up position on either side of the entrance. After a few minutes, in which Nikolas continued to lie on the ground in pain, a third person moved from the dimly lit corridor, between the two guards, and into the dark cell. Nikolas didn't have to look up to know who his visitor was.
"Your resilience continues to astound me," the newcomer said, giving off a hint of false admiration. "Men I would have deemed stronger than you didn't last nearly as long before the madness took them."
Nikolas, still in a considerable amount of physical and mental anguish, didn't look up, but continued to lie face-down, blowing small clouds of dust with each breath. He closed his eyes, though in his mind's eye he could clearly see his tormentor's face, punctuated as it often was with a cruel and sadistic smile.
"What, no comments? No curses or insults?" Falt Greyhaft clucked his tongue. "Were you any other man, you could be the most boring person I'd ever worked on here."
'Here,' in this case, meant a small, abandoned garrison south of Hearthglen, tucked back into the mountains separating the Tirisfal Glades from the region now known as the Plaguelands. It had been called such ever since the Scourge infected the land with its evil, poisonous taint. The soldiers stationed at this garrison had fled before the Undead, though the latter had never bothered to claim it. Greyhaft had discovered it some months ago, and began using it as his own personal laboratory, where he could carry out his "experiments" in relative quiet.
Nikolas slowly, painfully pushed himself to his hands and knees, moving to a sitting position against the wall farthest from the cell's entrance. He finally looked up at Greyhaft, his eyes boring into the other man's.
"Sorry to ruin your fun, Falt," Nikolas said with no attempt to hide the loathing in his voice. "Maybe I'll try to smile more as you fill my head with your demons."
Greyhaft crouched down, bringing his face level with Nikolas. "Three weeks you've been here, and yet you still fail to grasp the importance of my work. I will be the first to admit that my methods are less than desirable, but the potential ends more than justify what I do."
"Ah, so it's justifiable to make a deal with devils, all for the sake of the Light." Nikolas' remark was thick with sarcasm and contempt.
"You mock, Nikolas, but that is exactly what I have to do. You've fought the Scourge, you know of their evil. One must sometimes surround himself with such evil if he is to understand it, to fight it more effectively."
Nikolas scoffed. "I know plenty of places you could go to surround yourself in the Scourge's rot and decay. Somewhere like the Writhing Haunt comes to mind."
He barely had time to flinch before the back of Greyhaft's fist caught him full on his cheek. The blow threw Nikolas to the ground; he immediately tasted warm blood in his mouth, which he spat onto the dirt. He had fully expected such a reaction; though his failed attempt to defend the farmlands now known as the Writhing Haunt had taken place months ago, Greyhaft still carried the sting of that defeat. He gave Nikolas a look full of venom.
"You'll regret that remark, you insolent worm." Greyhaft stood and looked down at his prisoner. "You go back on the table first thing tomorrow."
Turning on his heel, Greyhaft left the cell and disappeared around a corner. Behind him, the guards locked the door and took up their usual positions on the other side of the room. Nikolas wiped the remaining blood onto his hand, then laid back down on the straw mat in one corner of the cell. Not for the first time, he thought about the strange fact that he was physically exhausted from the day's torture, though his body had itself been free from actual torment. No, Greyhaft's punishment was far more sinister, attacking the very mind and soul with dark images and shadowy impressions, and it had taken a terrible toll on Nikolas. Every night his exhausted body practically screamed for rest and relief, but the mental torment through which he went every night denied him all but the most broken sleep.
Tonight, Nikolas knew, would be no different. No sooner would he close his eyes than the terrible imaged would return, burning their terrible fear into his mind and shaking him to his very core. He always tried praying to the Light for relief, but with each tormented day he wondered more if it hadn't forsaken this wretched place. As he turned on his side, Nikolas thoughts turned, as they always did, to his family: to his sister, locked safely behind the doors of the Monastery to the north; to his mother, living far to the south, away from the Undead; and finally to his father, now dead almost a year. Nikolas wondered what they would think if they knew his plight. Turning over on his side, he tried to keep his parents and sister in his mind, knowing they'd quickly be replaced by the horror.
He closed his eyes and tried to sleep.

Wednesday, July 22, 2009

A New Approach

I'm trying a new approach with the story, where each chapter will start with a glimpe at Nikolas' past as he learns things from his mother and father. These snippets will help explain what makes Nikolas different than your run-of-the-mill spies, rogues and scouts. He isn't, of course, a superhero- he just has some tricks up his sleeves that others don't expect.

Here's my first example of this new approach, found at the beginning of Chapter 1:


"Focus, Nikolas. You've almost got it." Though earnest, Naya Tien's voice was quiet enough to avoid breaking her son's concentration.
Next to her, the boy started to sweat slightly, his face scrunched up in concentration. In front of him, a small pile of sticks stood in a cone, a faint burning smell wafting up into the air. For a second, Naya thought she could see a wisp of smoke rising from the twigs; Nikolas apparently did too, for he gasped in excitement, and in that moment lost his focus. The smoke disappeared.
The boy, barely past his eleventh year, slumped in defeat, and Naya intuitively knew he was about to start crying. She put her arm around his shoulder and pulled him close to her.
"It's alright, son, it's alright," she reassured. "You were very close. Here, feel the sticks. They're quite warm." Naya picked one up and offered it to the boy.
Nikolas took it, and despite a sob seemed to overcome his disappointment. "Almost hot enough to burn someone," he said with a weak smile.
"You see?" Naya turned her son to face her. "You'll have it this time, I just know it." She gave him a kiss on his forehead, and he turned back to the sticks. Half-closing his eyes and gritting his teeth, he started to concentrate on sticks in front of him.
Naya knew her husband wished that Nikolas were more interested in the teachings of the Light. Their son believed in the Light, believed in its power and benevolence. But where his sister desired very much to follow in their father's path, to become a champion of the Light, Nikolas showed no such interest. He had, instead, displayed a greater curiosity toward the abilities Naya had shown from birth, those of a sorceress.
That Altus and Naya had fallen in love and married surprised many, family members and friends and mentors alike. Followers of the Light commonly held wielders of arcane power with little regard, and often contempt. The magi, in turn, held little room for kindness or friendship with the "religious types." Thus it was, when Altus and Naya announced their betrothal to their respective masters, many met the news with disapproval. But the pair never faltered in their love and commitment toward each other, and had so far succeeded in raising a beautiful and happy family.
Despite their seperate interests, Nikolas in magic and the younger Katia in the Light, the two got along well, and for that Naya was grateful. Besides, she knew Nikolas would never show the kind of power in magic she herself had been born with, something that didn't really seem to bother him or her. The fact that he was interested in something she loved was wonderful enough.
A sting in Naya's nostrils broke into her thoughts, and with a spark of delight she realized the sticks before her son were starting to smoke, and in no small measure. She smiled in anticipation, and urged Nikolas on in her mind.
Sure enough, a few seconds later and with a flash, the pile of twigs burst into flame. It wasn't large, but it was strong and hot and bright. Nikolas' face broke into a wild grin as he turned to look at his mother. She returned his grin as he jumped up and yelped in triumph.
"I did it, Mother, I did it!" His voice surely carried across the yard into the house.
"Yes, you did, my boy! I'm so proud of you," she said, hugging her son tight. "I'm so proud of you."
Both turned to look at the small flame again, still burning bright. For a few quiet moments, they basked in the warmth of Nikolas' accomplishment, enjoying this moment. Finally Naya broke the silence.
"You did so well, Nikolas. I know it took time, and it wasn't easy- it will always require some effort." She turned her son to face her again. "It will never be as easy for you to do thse things as it is for me. You understand that, right?"
When he nodded, she continued. "I sense that your life will be much different than either mine or your father's. But you can learn much from us both, things that may help you wherever you go. That's why I teach you this, and that's why your Father has things to teach you as well."
She smiled again. "Now, once you have this down better, I'll show you how to make one that can't be seen." Her eyes twinkled as his grew wide in amazement and anticipation. "Now," Naya said," go and tell you Father what you've done."
As her son ran off to tell Altus about the wonderous thing he'd accomplished, Naya couldn't keep some few tears from coming to her eyes.

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Retooling


Right now I'm retooling the first few chapters of the story, changing some minor things that allow for better story flow.

In the meantime, here's a little intro to one of the main antagonists in the story, Falt Greyhaft:

Far to the north, Layette Manor stood safely ensconced within the foothills of the Alterac Mountains. To the south lay Strahnbrad, once a jewel of the former kingdom, now a festering ruin full of brigands, rogues and mercenaries- just the kind of people with which Falt Greyhaft had recently surrounded himself. As a liason from the Scarlet Crusade to the Syndicate, he worked with lowlifes and criminals on a daily basis. His orders came from the highest levels of the Crusade, but he didn't particularly mind them. He didn't hold himself so high and holy as others in the Crusade, and was in fact glad to work away from the tireless and desperate struggles against the Scourge.
With the Light's blessing, the Scarlet Crusade had held its own since the Third War and stood strong in several places. But the Scourge hadn't let up in the slightest, despite their huge setback in the far lands of Kalimdor. With the fall of one master another had risen- this mysterious Lich King, of whom one of the Light's greatest servants had become a lieutenant. Many in Lordaeron, or what remained of it, were bitter against former prince Arthas Menethil, and rightly so. He had stood poised to become Lordaeron's next champion, the greatest student of the legendary paladin Uther Lightbringer. But as the Scourge devastated the kingdom to which he was heir, Arthas lost himself in madness and desperation, to the point where he became consumed by a desire to avenge his kingdom's loss. Somewhere in the insanity that followed he betrayed his own people and allies, taking up arms against them as the Scourge's general in Lordaeron. At last report he had gone to Northrend for some unknown purpose, but his minions in Lordaeron were relentless in their continued attacks. The seemingly endless carnage and defeats had started to wear on many of the Crusade's bravest soldiers- only by the resolve and strength of its leaders had they remained steadfast.
One of those generals had just sent a missive to Greyhaft, updating him with the goings on up north. He saw Dathrohan had nothing of great import to pass along, just the usual casualty numbers and territory changes. Greyhaft noted that fewer soldiers had been lost this month as compared to the last. Well, it was the little things that mattered, isn't that what everyone said?
Putting the missive down, he picked up another letter, this one from much further south and not from any Crusader, though in Greyhaft's mind this was no less Scarlet business. It was old business, relatively speaking, but important nonetheless. Unfortunately, he saw, there was nothing to report. He put the letter down and walked to the window. It was past midnight, and storm clouds had begun to gather to the west over Lordamere Lake.
It had been almost three years to the day when Nikolas Tien had slipped out of his grasp. A captain at the Monastery when they met, Greyhaft had disliked Tien from the start. On the scout's third day, he had reported to the captain for orders. Falt had ordered him to duty in Hearthglen, knowing the precious need for good scouts in that part of the kingdom. When Tien asked if the post was permanent, Greyhaft replied that it was. At that point, in front of a good dozen soldiers or so, Tien had shown the gall to defy the order, saying he intended to stay near the Monastery. When asked why, the scout said he wanted to keep his sister safe. Greyhaft matter-of-factly told him that the sister, a priestess in the Monastery, would be perfectly safe, and that he was needed in Hearthglen.
Then that upstart refused again, at which point Greyhaft said it was an order, not a request. Tien smugly replied that he was not some conscript, that he had volunteered, and was going to stay near the Monastery regardless. With the others watching, Greyhaft had had little choice but to relent, not wanting to seem tyrannical. So he asked if Tien might be pleased with scouting duties in Tirisfal, with the occasional job of taking messages to and from Hearthglen. The latter agreed, even smiling at the compromise, but for Greyhaft, the damage had been done. He knew from that day that Tien would be trouble and a malcontent, though the degree of the problem could not have been known, not at that time. Falt decided to keep an eye on the scout, reporting every infraction to his superiors: in a cause as important as fighting the Scourge, there was no room for chinks in the Crusade's armor, no matter how small.
Over the next few months, to his dismay, Greyhaft had found little with which to criticize Tien. The man's work had been very useful, and for a while it seemed there'd be no problem. Then Greyhaft had begun to hear rumors that Tien was becoming...discontent. Through sources loyal and well-placed, he learned Nikolas had started to express doubts about the Crusade and they way they fought the Scourge. He felt the soldiers and leaders were becoming too brutal and extreme in their methods.
What that...dissenter...failed to realize, Greyhaft now remembered, was that the war to reclaim Lordaeron was more than a seemingly-futile battle. It was a war against evil itself, a war against demons and devils and all that was dark. The Undead had ripped life itself from the land and those living on it, and turned both into aberrations of nature, blasphemies to the Light itself. True, Greyhaft admitted to himself now, some of the methods employed by the Crusade were unpleasant, but they had been absolutely necessary. Faith demanded that all measures be taken to wipe every last abomination from existence. For good to prevail, not one particle of the Undead taint could exist, and removing it was the sacred charge taken up by the Scarlet Crusade.
With time, Tien's complaints grew into treachery. He began resisting orders to carry out the simplest of tasks, claiming he wished to know more about the Undead before he attacked them. His sister, the priestess, had tried to make him see reason, to see the truth of their cause, but the man's mind would not be assuaged. Repeated attempts by leaders spiritual and marshal to bring Tien back to reason failed. Greyhaft began seeking cause to have the man arrested and tried for treason, for in war desperate as the one in which the Crusade fought, anything less than total allegiance was the same as betrayal. Falt's efforts were in vain, however, as the traitor somehow managed to skirt a fine line and avoid going too far.
Then, Greyhaft remembered with a grim smile, Tien did the unthinkable. He and a footman patrol came upon an Undead straggler hiding in the mountains. Their orders at the time were to hold all Undead alive and take them to the Monastery, where they would be subjects for experimentation. But somewhere during the journey north, Tien had lost his mind and attacked his comrades, trying to free the abomination. The two escaped, but soon ran into another patrol. Tien and the monster had been promptly arrested and imprisoned in a farmhouse until both could be moved- the monster for his experiments, and Tien for the Monastery dungeons. Now, in the present, Greyhaft clearly remembered learning of this and his feeling of victory at finally getting his hands on a traitor.
But only two days later, Tien managed to get away, taking the monster with him. To make matters more serious, one of the Crusaders had been killed in the escape, two others wounded. Somehow, when finally within reach, Tien had escaped Greyhaft's grasp. He remembered the pure rage he felt, almost as if he'd had a demon itself in his hands only to watch it blow away with the wind. He had been so close. And he hadn't been about to give up.
For months following, Greyhaft had sent scouts and runners in all directions, trying for even a sniff of Tien's whereabouts. There were many who began turning against the Crusade- many, especially, after the death of Highlord Mograine- but few had proven so elusive. It seemed, to most, that Tien had truly disappeared. Greyhaft tried his sister, Katia, but to no avail. She maintained she knew nothing of his whereabouts, and was quite convincing. But when he planned more extreme interrogations, Katia's mentor- Inquisitor Whitemane- had intervened and commanded Greyhaft to cease his fruitless search.
And so he had, at least officially. From that time he worked in secret, hiring bounty hunters and others to be his eyes and ears, watching always for some little sign.
Greyhaft knew, years later, that his desire for justice had grown into an obsession. He had managed to let it go enough to where it didn't consume his as it had. Over time, the numbers of seekers he had out looking for Tien dwindled, though there were still a skilled few. He rarely lost sleep over the matter anymore, but then there were occasional nights, like tonight, where it all came back to him.
As he looked toward distant Lordamere, Falt Greyhaft wondered, not for the first time, if he might die never seeing the fruits of his dedicated search.

Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Chapter 2 is Done and You Get to Meet Someone New

First things first: Chapter 2 is done, and I like how it turned out. The whole thing is still in development so there may be changes, though they will likely be small. Now, the few readers I have are all in the family and therefore get the chapters e-mailed to them. If you're reading this and aren't on my e-mail, leave a comment with an e-mail address and I'll be happy to send you a copy to read/comment on/critique.

Now, to the new kid on the block:

Alira Stone- co-owner of the Bear's Brew
In Chapter 2, we meet the person that will likely become Nikolas' love interest- her name is Alira Stone, and she's from a small hamlet called Shadyglen, which lies on the road through the Hillsbrad Foothills, in between Southshore and the border with the Arathi Highlands. Shadyglen is little more than a few shops, homes and, most notably, an inn, owned and operated by Alira and her father, Harac. Alira's mother died of disease when the girl was twelve, leaving her and her father to manage the inn. She is very kind to all her guests, even when they are flat-out drunk and rowdy. But dealing with drunkards and ruffians of all kinds has given her a tough side that comes out when necessary.

At some point in the process, Morena Baccarin stood out as someone who could play the role well. She's best known for her role as Inara on the Joss Whedon bit of genius, "Firefly" (as well as the subsequent movie "Serenity.")

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Another Teaser

Southshore (image from wowwiki.com)

Some miles away on the road from Silverpine to Southshore, Fitch Millen wiped his dagger on the ground, leaving streaks of blood on the grass. He looked around, seeing no one except his small band. They had managed to pull off the heist without arousing suspicion, something not easy in the busy travel hours of the morning. Outnumbered almost two to one, the four travelers had been easy to manage. Fitch's sharpshooters had taken the guards out by expertly hitting them in the neck with their crossbows. The other two barely had time to reach for their weapons before Fitch and the other three had them on the ground. Glosser and Bilgi had shaken them down, taking their money and other valuables. Then the men had been stripped before Fitch cut their throats. The bandits dragged the bodies and covered them with branches some yards from the road, out of sight and mind. None of them were worried about discovery- mountain lions or moss spiders would likely find the corpses before anyone else.
Of most interest to Fitch was what had fallen out of one traveler's shoe- a note wrapped around a small key. The note had only a few symbols written on them, Elvish by the look of them. That was odd- the man carrying it was human, as were his companions. Fitch began to wonder where the man had come from, and where he was going.
He looked toward the road- the travelers had been heading east, and by the looks of their provisions would have had to stop sometime soon. That put their likely destinations at either Hillsbrad or Southshore; smaller villages wouldn't have made good refitters.
He looked back toward his men. "Bilgi!"
The mute hulk of a man looked up.
"You get their papers yet?"
The brute nodded, then brought the documents to Fitch. It took him a minute to find what he wanted: the group had come from Ambermill, an Alliance town on the edge of Silverpine Forest. They were headed.....there. Southshore, like Finch thought. Their business was listed as a non-commercial personal visit, and they were to stay only a day or so. Beyond that, there was little useful information. But Finch had a destination, and the fact that the man had hidden this key could only mean one thing: whatever it unlocked was or contained something valuable, and that thing was probably in Southshore.
Rounding up his band of brigands, they headed southeast toward the seaport. Before heading to the bank, Fitch had to find someone who could decipher the symbols on the note. Fortunately, the Syndicate had men in Southshore who could.
Yes, Finch thought to himself, this could be something good, something to win the appreciation of Lord Layette. And that was a rare and valuable commodity.

Thursday, May 21, 2009

Thursday Two-Fer

Part One of the Two-Fer: a segment from Chapter 1 of the story. Enjoy!


The Scarlet Bastion in Stratholme

Far to the north, in the city of Stratholme, Falt Greyhaft rode toward the Scarlet Bastion, careful not to make too much noise: the Undead with whom the Crusade shared the dying stronghold were on the other side, but there was no sense in taking chances.
As he came upon Crusaders' Square, the central hub of Crusade forces in Stratholme, he slowed his horse to a stop. He was almost immediately challenged by a loud voice: "Declare yourself, stranger!"
"Peace, Captain Malor, it's just me."
"Greyhaft?"
"Aye, captain, it's Greyhaft."
"Prove it!"
"You owe me seven gold and forty-three copper for our game two weeks ago," Greyhaft called with a smile.
"I'm still not convinced," Malor answered with a smile.
"You smell like burnt rat tail!"
Greyhaft heard several chuckles coming from Malor and the guards with him, then: "Come forth, you pathetic Gilly dog!"
Smiling at the mock insult, Greyhaft spurred his mount forward into the square, soon coming to the fortifications where Malor and the other guardsmen stood watch, keeping an eye out in case the Undead attacked. He dismounted, then strode forward and grasped Malor in a firm handshake.
"Welcome back. Did you meet success?" Malor didn't know the particulars of Greyhaft's mission, but any success was good news.
"Aye, I believe I did. Is Lord Dathrohan waiting for me?"
Malor nodded. "He is. I believe he's at prayer in the throne room."
"Very well. When I get done meeting with him, you'd better have my money ready," Greyhaft said.
Malor scoffed. "It's taken me this long to pay you, what's another two weeks?"
Greyhaft laughed and entered the Bastion. The building's interior was a cool refreshment from the acrid smell of smoke outside. Some Crusaders had expressed their opinion that the fires which burned endlessly across the city were unnatural, kept alive by some magic force. Indeed, they had been burning since that terrible day years ago when the heir of Lordaeron had swept through the city, slaughtering every person, living or undead, that stood in his path. That day, Greyhaft mused, had changed the world forever.
He paused at the entrance to the Crimson Throne and peered through the doorway. Grand Crusader Dathrohan was on the far side of the wide room, kneeling before an ornate throne. Greyhaft waited for his leader to finish praying, and only stepped into the chamber when Dathrohan had risen from the floor. His footsteps turned the Grand Crusader around.
"Welcome back Greyhaft," Dathrohan said, seating himself on the throne. "I trust you met with success?"
"I did, milord. The thieves are willing to work with us."
A grim look crossed the Grand Crusader's visage, and for a brief moment a shadow seemed to darken his eyes.
"Perfect."

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Part Two of the Two-Fer: A Contest!!!

Some days ago, I e-mailed people asking if anyone was any good at drawing. Well, now here's your chance to prove it. Below is a very rudimentary idea of what Nikolas' swords look like (he has two and wields one in each hand). If you are interested in a prize (small, but still a prize), then submit your artist's rendition of the sword pictures below and send it to me. Rules? There aren't really any. You can draw the sword by itself, you can draw it from multiple angles (an artistic ability that REALLY eludes me), or you can draw it in the hands of some daring warrior or something like that. What does the winner get? Well, their picture will be proudly displayed on this blog for the internet world to see. There will also be another prize, like a gift card or lunch or ice cream or something. I'll get to that later. So the contest officially starts now, and will end sometime in the future!

Details of the sword for consideration- the blade is intentionally black. The handle is wrapped in brown or dark grey leather (your choice), and the pommel is a gryphon's claw (like an eagle). Draw the guard as you like, whether straight like below or all curvy-cool. Up to you.

Now.......Draw!!!

Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Prologue

Tirisfal Glades


The approaching dawn did little to bring light to the Tirisfal Glades, where the taint of death and decay was strong and ever present. Suffering from the blight brought by the undead armies of the Scourge, the once beautiful forests now stood in shades of sickly green and brown, not quite dead but far from flourishing. Many of the smaller plants had died off, and those animals that survived had mostly migrated to more welcoming environments. The air smelled of rotting wood, and a constant, though thin, mist seemed to cover the whole of the land.
In the darkness that shrank slowly with the rising sun, two figures moved as silently as possible, pausing at each spot of natural cover to survey their surroundings. They had been on the move since late the night before, not stopping to rest, but only one of them was beginning to grow hungry.
At the next thicket, both dropped low to the ground as they had done dozens of times in the last few hours. One of them slowly raised his head until his eyes could see just over the thorny branches that concealed them. He slowly scanned the woods through which they had just come, his ears listening for any sound other than what nature made, but no sound came. There was no indication that they were being followed, at least not closely.
The man, a human originally from Stormwind, dropped back down to the ground and looked at his companion. It took some effort for him not to flinch at the other's appearance, still somewhat unsettling despite the days they had known each other. A human in life, he had lost most of his hair; his eyes, now dark and cold, seemed to sink back into their sockets; and his skin peeled away from muscle and bone on his arms and legs. The Scourge plague had ravaged the man' body in life, and even in death seemed to consume it. Though he walked and talked, he was anything but alive. The irony of their situation was on both men's minds. For the last several months, the living one had spent his time scouting out positions and strength of the Scourge armies that yet remained in Lordaeron. Like the soldiers around him, every day was spent finding ways to combat the Undead and drive them from the land. The dead one had been a simple man in life, a baker in Hearthglen who left a wife and young child behind, saved because of an impromptu visit to her parents in Hillsbrad. A month ago, had they encountered each other, a fight to the death surely would have taken place. But things had changed since then, changed in ways neither of them likely could have predicted.
With a look, the undead man indicated he was ready to continue, and the pair moved on.
Only once did they encounter any Scarlet Crusaders, and the living man decided the soldiers were ignorant of the pair's escape. But word of betrayal and treason would surely spread quickly, and the Crusaders' superiors would surely exert no small effort to find and recapture the man and the near-skeleton who traveled with him. Escape from their makeshift prison had been simple enough; now if only their luck would hold until they reached their destination.
They had decided to head for Brill. In the past months, many undead had been able to break away from the Scourge armies, having somehow regained their free will and mental independence. These newly-free undead had taken over much of western Lordaeron, setting the former human capital city as the heart of their new kingdom. It was toward these lands the two travelers hurried; both had decided that if the walking dead were to find refuge, it would be among these his kin.
They reached the southern tip of Brightwater Lake near mid-day and rested among some rocks near the water before continuing on. Their luck in avoiding Scarlet patrollers held, though neither was too too surprised. The closer they got to Brill and the undead territory, the smaller any Scarlet Crusade presence would be. After resting for an hour or so, the pair moved on, almost as silent as the dying trees around them.

*****

Miles away, to the northeast, a Scarlet captain let out a frustrated breath and gritted his teeth.
Escaped. The man against whom he had dedicated much of his energy over the last two months had escaped. Worse still, he had rescued one of them, one of the thousands of abominations against whom the captain and his men fought every day. The scope of this blasphemy, this affront to the Light was enough to clench the captain's fists. By sheer will he kept himself from sweeping everything off the table in a child-like tantrum, but he was close.
For weeks, this man, this traitor, had been lacking in his faith and dedication to the most holy cause of removing the Scourge from the land. Few knew of the man's doubts, but the captain had his sources. He had known, and had assigned several of his best men to finding evidence of the man's growing betrayal.
Betrayal? Despite his rage, the captain wondered if that was too harsh a word. After all, it wasn't as though the man had killed any Crusaders or attacked any holdings. But that thought quickly left, as the captain decided the man truly was a traitor. He had been taken in by the Crusade and give responsibility, not to mention safety and security. And how did he repay the Crusade? By questioning their motives, their methods, perhaps even their very beliefs.
Yes, the captain told himself, the man was a traitor, a heretic, and deserved the extent of justice that the Scarlet Crusade could give out. Especially in light of the revelation that he had helped an abomination, an affront to life and the Light itself, escape the justice that it deserved.
But by now they were far away, likely out of reach of his soldiers and patrols. That didn't matter, the captain assured himself. He had his sources outside the Crusade as well, and he would have them keep their eyes open. A man like this would know how to hide, but even he wouldn't be able to keep the mark they'd given him from everyone.
The captain smiled. It would take time for this man, this heretic, to face justice. But the captain was a patient man, and wasn't going anywhere anytime soon.

*****

Two floors above him, a young woman wrote feverishly, trying to finish the letter she had started the day before. She had managed to secure one of the messenger pigeons used to carry missives to and from the other Crusade bastions scattered about what remained of Lordaeron, now called the Plaguelands. But she'd had to do so secretly: here at the Monastery, she enjoyed some level of influence, but if anyone knew to whom she wrote, it would raise eyebrows and unwanted questions.
She had been torn about the whole thing, wanting to do the right thing but wondering exactly what that was. Her heart tugged against her mind, and she had lost sleep over it. But fortunately he had made the choice for her, and in a way that kept her safe. And now, she wanted to thank him and wish him well.
My greatest worry is that our paths will never cross again, for I feel I won't leave any time soon, and I am sure you have no plans to return. My prayer is that the Light may see you safely to your destination and guide you to your destiny. Know that I love you and care for you, despite the different way in which we see things. I hope sincerely that we will see each other again.
Light be with you.
Signing the letter, she rolled it up and tied it with a small purple ribbon. She went over to the window where the pigeon waited patiently and secured the small roll to its leg. Using her training to communicate the letter's intended destination to the bird, she released it into the twilight, praying silently that it would find its way south in safety. Wiping a tear from her eye, she left her room quickly, rushing to avoid being late to worship service.

*****

The pair reached the borders of Brill shortly after dawn on the second day since their escape. They worked their way south to the main road leading into the town, where they decided the dead man would have the best chance of encountering those like him without appearing suspicious.
The two parted ways, each wishing the other luck. After that, no words were said as the undead began walking toward Brill. After he was out of sight, the other man followed him at a distance. He simply wanted to make sure his companion of the last few days would be okay. He marveled to himself that he should be so concerned for one whom he earlier would have considered an enemy. But they had become something akin to friends, and he wanted to be sure his friend was safe.
He had little to worry about. Though the patrolmen had been a bit wary at first, after learning the undead man was like them- raised from the dead yet free from the Scourge- they sent him along with a runner to Brill, where he would be taken care of.
The man who yet lived waited until his companion was out of sight again, then began working his way southeast. Where his ultimate destination lay, he didn't know. He rubbed the mark on his forearm that marked him as a traitor- that he would have to keep hidden if he wanted to associate with normal society. He wasn't sure what would happen if anyone saw it, what they would think, or if they would give him a chance to explain. He wasn't even sure where he could live and keep his secret indefinitely.
For now he would return to the Hinterlands, to the place where more than any other he felt at home; where he might, for the first time in months, feel truly safe.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

Update on the Update

Okay, forget the update I added to yesterday's post. Tien will still be the main family's last name. Nikolas will have a different name change later. Stay tuned. And forget the name Gavalan. For now.

Friday, April 10, 2009

The Main Character- A History, Part V: Change

The Monastery in the Tirisfal Glades (image from www.toomanyannas.com)

UPDATE: Change Nikolas' last name (and that of his family) to Gavalan. Altus Galavan, Naya Galavan, Katia Galavan, and Nikolas Galavan. Why Galavan? Two reasons: a) it's a mix of the words gallant, valor and valiant, words that describe the family; and b) Nikolas will use the name "Tien" as a nom de usage/alias later on. Okay, back to the back story action.

As I traveled north toward the Tirisfal Glades, I learned at taverns and inns much about what had happened since Stratholme and Darrowshire. In his quest against the Scourge and its leaders, Arthas followed a demon named Mal'Ganis to Northrend, a frozen wasteland continent at the roof of the world. It turned out the Scourge had been created by demons not of this world. There, in Northrend, something happened to the prince that made him lose his mind and actually side with the Scourge. He returned, murdered his father, and disappeared as quickly as he had returned, leaving his people to watch the kingdom to which Arthas had been heir fell apart.

Uther Lightbringer, Arthas' teacher and friend, had parted ways with the prince at Stratholme, refusing to slaughter innocent people. Much of Lordaeron's army followed Uther, including Arthas' close friend, a sorceress named Jaina Proudmoore. When Arthas reappeared following his father's murder, he somehow had allied himself with the Scourge. Commanding its agents, he confronted Uther at Andorhal and slew his former teacher. That left Jaina in command of the Lordaeron armies. Reports are that she followed the advice of some mystical advisor and took the armies west, across the sea, to Kalimdor. The Scourge, led by its demon masters, followed them to that distant land.

Reports came back to the Eastern Kingdoms that the Scourge met a major defeat at a place called Mount Hyjal, and that somehow the spirits of the earth itself had risen up and vanquished the Undead masters. It was evident, though, that the Scourge was far from finished. They still held much of Lordaeron; they had all but decimated the high elves that lived north of Lordaeron; and rumors spread that Arthas had survived and taken command of the Undead. What his plan was, no one exactly knew. But the Scourge fought on, continuing their attempts to wipe out the living.

The remnants of Lordaeron's armies had rallied behind leaders from the Silver Hand, great warriors like Alexandros Mograine and Taelan Fordring. They renamed their forces the Scarlet Crusade, and concentrated their defenses in and around major cities and locations that hadn't fallen to the Scourge: Tyr's Hand, Hearthglen, Northridge, the Monastery, New Avalon and Havenshire served as the main bases of operations. Other large cities, like Andorhal and Stratholme had fallen under Scourge control. Outside of Lordaeron, the Scourge had begun to push eastward into the vast forests of Silverpine; beyond that, it appeared that the Scourge had little or no presence. That gave me comfort, knowing that my mother would be safe far to the south in Stormwind, and that my friends in the Hinterlands were safe for the moment.

From Southshore, I made my way north to the Tirisfal Glades, which I found had also been overrun by the Scourge. It took time, staying hidden and avoiding roads, but I finally reached the Monastery (now called the Scarlet Monastery in honor of the Scarlet Crusade). Staunch defense by Alliance soldiers had kept the sanctuary safe, and as I approached I felt heartened. That feeling quickly left, though, as I came upon the guards watching the path to the Monastery. From the onset, I felt they were treating me with suspicion, as though I were an enemy. I told them I wanted to see Katia Tien, and they recognized the name, but wouldn't let me pass. Instead, they sent a runner to fetch my sister and bring her to us.

It had been some years since we'd seen each other, but with Father's death, our reunion was bittersweet. We embraced, happy to see each other well. Katia told the guards I was to be trusted, and took me on into the Monastery. She introduced me to her mentor, a priestess named Sally Whitemane. Katia was one of Whitemane's better students, and was quickly becoming a talented priestess whose ability to use the Light's power would soon match Father's own skill. Whitemane immediately struck me as a strong and determined woman- she had a fierce but cold beauty; her gaze seemed to me as it were ice. I met in her the same distant quality, the same suspicion as the guards. She was cordial, but my welcome was anything but warm.

Honoring Father's wish, I tried to convince Katia to leave for the south. But true to the stubbornness she got from Father, Katia refused. She told me of all that the Scourge had done: how they had taken over the overwhelming majority of Lordaeron, how the capital city was an empty shell, and how the Scourge had somehow managed to destroy the entire wizard city of Dalaran. She said the remaining armies of Lordaeron were determined to hold on to that which they still had, and try and reclaim the land from the Scourge. Nothing I said dissuaded her from her intention to stay and fight. Feeling responsible for her safety, I decided to stay and keep an eye on her. I offered my scouting services to Renault Mograine, leader of the martial forces at the Monastery. Katia vouched for my intergrity and trustworthiness, and Mograine reluctantly agreed.

While Katia and the other clerics at the Monastery worked on new ways to fight the Scourge, my time was spent scouting Undead positions in the Tirisfal Glades. My job was to report their movements, numbers, and any arming or building up of defenses. I also worked as a messenger of sorts, taking messages and news from the Monastery through the mountains to Hearthglen and back. It was somewhat mundane work most of the time, but it allowed me to keep an eye on Katia.

The more I spent time among the Crusade soldiers, the more I became concerned at what the armies of Lordaeron ws becoming. I can find no better description than to say that a kind of darkness or gloominess was evident in their very countenances, as if a blackness lay within, hidden by their proclaimed devotion to the Light. This was most evident in the leadership, people like Whitemane and Mograine.

As I listened to soldiers' conversations and sermons from Crusade priests, I began to gather what had happened to Lordaeron's armies. Their intent of driving the Scourge from the land, even from existence, had been firm from the beginning. But the Scourge never seemed to weaken, and despair began to settle in the hearts and minds of the Crusaders. Despair turned to fear, fear turned to paranoia, paranoia turned to fanaticism.

That paranoia began to consume the Crusade- where at first they viewed the Scourge as their primary enemy, they soon began to distrust those of all different races. Even long-time allies, like the dwarves or high elves, were viewed with suspicion. The Crusade had essentially isolated themselves from everyone that wasn't human.

But I soon learned the problem didn't stop there.

As the weeks wore on, the Crusade's suspicion began to spread to everyone who wasn't part of the Crusade. Outsiders, human or otherwise, were treated as hostile unless they could prove their loyalty. The effect was that those outside the Crusade began to view the Crusaders as fanatics, zealots and extremists. Some began to publicly question the motives and actions of the Crusade and its leaders. These were imprisoned, if possible, by the Crusade, deemed to be a danger to both morale and security. I began to have my doubts, but was careful to keep them to only myself. Even my sister was unaware of my growing concern; if confronted, I would blame grief for Father's death.

As it is, I must now tread lightly on a daily basis. I am glad that my only work lies in scouting and reporting Scourge locations and numbers. I thank the Light that I am outside the Scarlet bastions most of the time, for despite the constant presence of the Undead in Lordaeron, I still feel peace in the forests.

I do not know, however, that I can stay too much longer, if the Crusade continues to fall further into paranoia and despair, even madness. For now, I will watch and wait, hoping things get better before they become worse. For now, Katia is safe; Mother is safe; and I am alive. That is enough.

High Inquisitor Isillien, leader in the Scarlet Crusade (image from www.wowwiki.com)

Thursday, April 9, 2009

The Main Character Two-fer: A History, Parts III and IV

Part III- Growing Up

For the next thirteen years, I essentially lived as an elf- eating their food, drinking their drinks, singing their songs, and playing their games. When I turned 17, Anu'Serr began taking me out on patrols and hunting parties. On the third such trip, I had my first battle encounter with forest trolls (to this point I had only seen them from a distance). I found them to be tall and extremely strong, but my training served me well and we survived the attack. Every time I fought the trolls, I learned more about how they fight, how they think, how they move, and used that to my advantage. Over the years there have been a number of close calls and I have a nice collection of scars, but I've managed to make it so far with my limbs still attached.

As I fought and bled and hurt and felt victory with the elves, I developed a close kinship to them. Anu'Serr, more than my teacher, became my older brother- a mentor to guide me, but never to replace my father. Others became close friends for whom I would willingly give myself (and I knew they would do the same for me). They taught me what they had learned about nature, that it had a voice, and that if one listened closely enough, he might hear its whisper. I learned the diverse uses of each plant, how liferoot can help one heal his wounds and fadeleaf sharpens one's senses. I think some of the elves might have had the beginnings of talent for what I have heard called druidism, a gift embodied by some of their distant kin, the Night Elves. I have not any skill like that, but living and Quel'Danil has awakened in me a feel for nature and life that I think most urban-dwelling humans and peoples lack.

This connection, I think, became the strongest in my relationship with Silvereye, my gryphon. When I was 16, my father took me to Aerie Peak for my birthday. He, Dobrin and Anu'Serr had arranged for me to have my own gryphon hatchling to raise, train and care for. I was ecstatic. My father lectured me about the diligence and maturity I would have to show, but he didn't need to say anything: growing up around the majestic creatures and watching how the Wildhammers cared for them had given me a sense of awe and almost reverance toward teh gryphons. I knew that they were powerful and sometimes deadly, but if properly treated and respected, a gryphon could become a person's closest friend. Dobrin gave Silvereye to me when she was only a few months old. She was named for her eyes that were as clear and sharp as mirrors.

Under the close watch of Anu'Serr and a few of Aerie Peak's gryphon keepers, I learned how to feed her and care for her. We rarely spent time apart. Even when I started going on patrols with the elves, Silvereye would be close by, either perching on a tree asleep or hunting small game for food. When she was big enough (I was about 18 years old), I began training her to fight alongside us. She became a valuable part of our patrols, scouting ahead for trolls and attacking them from the air. I've heard that many hunters have such a connection with their pets that the pair can essentially read each other's thoughts. Over time Silvereye and I developed a similar connection. With a thought or look I could communicate what I needed, and she could do the same. It's nothing so advanced as mind-reading or telepathy, but just an understanding.

Finally, when Silvereye was about 5 years old (I was 21), she was big enough to ride. Having spent so much time together, it was easy for she and I to make the transition to mount and rider. A large part of that bond is trust, and we had learned to trust each other implicitly over the years. Silvereye had become my best friend. She knew I would take care of her, and I knew she would never let me fall. I gained a new feeling of freedom when I started flying on Silvereye's back. To this day I've never experienced anything to rival such exhileration.


So it was that I spent much of my adolescence and the beginning of my adult life among the forests of the Hinterlands, among the elves and with the dwarves. Those were happy times for me, and for my family. I didn't see them a lot, but I was able to spend important occasions with them- I never missed a birthday, and usually made it home for Winter's Veil or Noblegarden. I was proud to see my sister off as she headed north to Loraderon, accepted as a new student at the Monastary tucked away in the Tirisfal Glades. When I was 24, my father recieved a reassignment from the Silver Hand. He was to take a post at Tyr's Hand, far to the northeast near Lordaeron's eastern coast. He and my mother left while I stayed behind, accepting Quel'Danil as my new permanent home.

A gryphon like those found in The Hinterlands (image from WoWWiki)

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A Scourge Necropolis hovering over Lordaeron (image from WoWWiki)

Part IV- The Scourge Invasion

The world at large turned upside down in the year 25. I was 27 at the time, as unaware as everyone else of the danger and destruction that would soon be visited on the world. I learned later that the pieces necessary for the downfall of Lordaeron had been in motion for some years, but the orchestrators somehow managed to keep their work away from the eyes of the world. Perhaps we had become complacent since our victory over the Horde, confident that we were all but invincible. If so, may our children forgive us our naievety.

To summarize, the troubles first started when citizens became sick
in several of Lordaeron's towns and villages. At first people thought it was just a sickness that would come and go, like any other. But when the dead started to rise again, people started to see how wrong they were. In a matter of a few months, thousands were in danger of being infected by this mysterious plague. The King's own son, Arthas Menethil, helped determine that the plague had been spread through infected grain, and the entire operation was centered around Andorhal, the chief grain distribution hub for the kingdom. The whole thing had been engineered by demons intent on conquering our world- they had manufactured the plague to raise an army of Undead to infest and overthrow the land. The prince and his companions managed to destroy the infected grain, but they were largely too late. The Undead armies, more commonly known as the Scourge, grew with each person they killed; they quickly claimed much of Lordaeron for its own. The armies of Lordaeron and what reinforcements they could muster from their allies fought valiantly and fiercely. But in time only a few bastions of life and humanity remained in the once mighty kingdom, like Hearthglen, Tyr's Hand and the Monastery in northern Tirisfal. My parents were at Tyr's Hand and my sister at the Monastery, so at the beginning we were spared the tragedy that befell so many other families. But the fight against the Scourge would touch everyone in some way, and more often than not, all that was left behind was death, sorrow and pain.

When I first heard that the plague was more than a typical illness, I left Quel'Danil and joined my father in Lordaeron. We were with Uther Lightbringer when he met up with Prince Arthas at Stratholme. When Arthas decided to kill the citizens of Stratholme rather than risk their infection and rebirth as Undead, Uther went against the prince and left, and Father and I left with him. Uther assigned Father to join a small force being sent to defend Darrowshire, a small town in the heart of eastern Lordaeron. Leading the force was a kind but formidable paladin named Davil Crockford; the leader of the town's militia was a man by the name of Joseph Redpath.

The Scourge attacked Darrowshire shortly after our arrival. We defeated the first wave of skeletal warriors and ghouls with some ease, and our confidence was bolstered; it seemed that the Light was with us and would protect us from the unholy Scourge. But the Undead captains were strong and clever, and the second wave almost broke us. Only the paladins' command of the Light's power kept the Scourge from ruining our defenses. From there, however, the battle turned ill and quickly so.

One of the Scourge captains, known to all as Horgus the Ravager, fought his way to Davil and engaged him in battle. Davil won the fight, but suffered a mortal wound and died shortly thereafter. Father and the other paladins managed to stay organized despite the fall of their leader, but what happened to the Darrowshire militia was far more devastating. The other Scourge leader, a death knight by the name of Marduk Blackpool, sent in his most elite forces. As they cleaved their way through our defenses, Blackpool approached Captain Redpath and, by some dark and powerful magic, ripped the man's soul from his body. Far away though I was, on the other side of the battle, I could hear the cry of agony from the Darrowshire captain. It is a sound and feeling that haunts me to this day. What followed was worse, for Redpath and for us. Through some necromantic means, Blackpool twisted Redpath's spirit into an evil shadow of itself. As we watched, Redpath's corrupted spirit began spreading the taint of dark magic to the defenders of Darrowshire, turning them against their brothers. Worse than that, the now-evil soldiers began murdering those women, children, and infirmed who had not the time to evacuate Darrowshire before the Scourge attack.

Our defense utterly shattered, the paladins called for a mass retreat: anyone who could get out was ordered to do so by any means possible. Father, myself and the other paladins covered the retreat of as many civilians and soldiers as could get away. We managed to hold off the Scourge long enough for them to make their way across the Thondroril River (I learned later they made it safely to Hearthglen). We decided to head east to Tyr's Hand. As we traveled, we knew there would be danger of running into more Scourge force
s. Father told me he had sent a letter to Mother in Tyr's Hand, asking her to leave for the southern kingdoms, away from the Scourge threat. He said he wasn't sure the letter had reached her, so he asked me to get her out of Lordaeron should he fall. Of course I agreed, though I vowed to myself not to let anything happen to my father nor anyone in my family.

After only a few days of travel, we happened across a small Scourge force. We fought them and drove them back for some hours, before they were reinforced by another small contingent of Undead. It was at this point that my heart was shattered- as Father held off a pair of ghouls, a massive Abomination (a twisted creation of body parts and corpses crudely sewn together) came up behind him. I saw it and was too far away to intercept, so I vainly tried to fell it with arrows. I might as well have been poking an elk with a needle. The A
bomination knocked him to the ground with one swipe of its massive cleaver. Father's armor was split, his side torn open. Three other paladins rushed to his side and brought the Abomination down. I rushed to his side, where the life in him was slowly slipping away. As I kneeled in the pool of blood flowing from his torn body, he used his final breaths to tell me how proud he was of me, and how he wanted me to make sure our family was safe.

Father died in my arms, but I barely had time to weep or grieve: the Scourge were mounting a counterattack. The knights had to tear me away from Father's body forced me to leave it behind. Our numbers were too few and our strength drained; we had to flee. We managed to get away, and continued our trek to Tyr's Hand. All I could think about as we walked was my father. I'd replay moments from my life when we had spent time toge
ther, laughed together. It took all my effort to keep the image of his broken body and his Scourge attackers away, and more often than not my attempts were in vain. Hot rage boiled together with bitter sorrow, and I wondered how I would tell my mother and sister.

As it turns out, I didn't have to say anything. As soon as we made it to Tyr's Hand (gratefully finding it unscathed by the Scourge), I found my mother, and my face said it all. She looked at me and saw my grief, knowing immediately what had happened. She fainted and was out for several hours. When she came to, I told her everything that had happened since Stratholme. When I told her that Father wanted her and Katia to go south, away from the Scourge, she was hesitant at first; she felt safe in Tyr's Hand, and feelings of taking vengeance started to creep into her mind. But when I emphasized that her safety
was Father's last wish, she relented and agreed to leave with me.

As the Scourge had occupied much of the region by that point, we decided to make our way through the mountains into the Hinterlands. I sent word ahead to Quel'Danil that we would be coming and by which route they could expect us. It took us two weeks of traveling through snows and high passes, but we finally started to descend into the warmer valleys below the mountains. Scouts from Quel'Danil found us and gave us food and drink before taking us to the lodge. We rested there for several days. In that time, I sent word to Dobrin of Father's death. I was glad to learn the Scourge had yet to come to the Hinterlands; indeed, scout reports showed they had stopped their southward expansion on the northern side of the pass between the Hinterlands and Lordaeron.

When we were well rested, Mother and I traveled by gryphon to Southshore. There we learned that Lordaeron's capital city had fallen into ruin after Arthas murdered his father on the throne. No one knew exactly why the prince had descended into the madness that now consumed him, they only knew that he was but a shadow of his former self. We also learned that much of the Scourge force seemed to have left Lordaeron and sailed west for the far continent of Kalimdor, a land mysterious and largely unknown to humans. Why exactly they had left we didn't learn until later. What mattered at that point is that Mother was sailing south to safety. I parted with her, vowing to fulfill the other part of Father's wish in making sure Katia was safe.

An Abomination, similar to the one that killed Altus (image from WoWWiki)

Tuesday, April 7, 2009

The Main Character- A History, Part II: A New Life

Quel'Danil Hunting Lodge (from wowwiki.com)

The elven hunting lodge was nothing short of breathtaking, like nothing I'd ever seen before. It looked so distinct, and yet seemed to fit the mountain forests as if it had grown from the ground. The elves called it "Quel'Danil," which meant "peak of the sun." Almost instantly I fell in love with the place, wanting to never leave. I was young then, and couldn't imagine how much that place would come to mean to me.

Anu'Serr took us around, showing us the big centr
al area where the elves dined and relaxed and taking us to the armory where there was an awesome assortment of blades, bows and other weapons. He showed us the training grounds, where he let me try out a training sword. My father had taught me how to wield a blade, and Anu'Serr was again impressed by my ability. Finally, he took us to meet Jalinde Summerdrake, the elven captain in charge of the lodge. She, too, had fought alongside my father in the Second War, and greeted us warmly. She told us we were welcome to visit anytime.

I feel I should add now that even as a child I had always taken a great interest in nature. I used to love stories of the great dragons and legends that t
old of trees that could walk. My father said he'd even heard stories of wood elves who could turn into animals. From those stories and my free time in the forests of Hillsbrad during the Second War, I gained my love of the outdoors. I grew to prefer the countryside over the big cities of the Alliance. I preferred to spend my youth pretending I was a hunter in the forest than a soldier of the Alliance like the other boys.

During our visit, which lasted several weeks, something inside of me awoke. I felt an exhilaration being in such a natural-feeling place. It wasn't just that the building was isolated out in the middle of the forest; it was as if the lodge was the forest itself. I felt a lightness in my heart, a smile in my soul, and I felt at peace here. Looking back, it was the kind of feeling one gets when he returns home.

When it came time to leave, I told Mother and Father what I had felt. I told them I wanted to be a hunter, like the elves, and live in the forests. I thought they would just laugh, that Father would say he wanted me to grow up to be a mighty paladin or soldier or priest like him. Instead, he simply put his hand on my shoulder and said, "You'll make a fine hunter, son." I looked at my mother, almost expecting this to be a trick, but only saw a sincere smile on her face.*

When Anu'Serr learned of my desire, he made my parents an offer: if they would allow it, I could come to the lodge every summer and train with him. He offered to teach me how to hunt, track and move like an elf through the forest, to make armor and weapons as the elves do. My parents liked the idea, and held the high elves with great respect. So it was agreed.
I started that next year. In April, my father would take me to the lodge, and I would return home in November for winter. Over time, I began to spend more time with the elves, and shortly before my parents left the Hinterlands, I was all but a permanent resident at Quel'Danil.

Anu'Serr taught me much. He taught me how to move like an elf, swiftly and silently- because I am human, I didn't have the natural lightness with which elves move, so I had to learn to compensate. I'd never beat an elf in a foot race, but I learned to run undetected through the woods faster than most humans I know. I at least became quick enough to escape any troll threat, and that is no small feat, even for an elf. I also learned how to be virtually invisible, using my surroundings to shroud my presence, so that only the keenest eye or sense of smell would know something was out of place.

I was taught how to fight like an elf. Elves in general avoid the large, powerful but difficult-to-wield weapons preferred by humans and orcs. Especially in the woods, they prefer smaller but swifter weapons, for speed can be just as deadly as power. Anu'Serr taught me to use swords, daggers, staves and spears as weapons in almost any situation. I learned that the handle of a sword can be as effective a defensive tool as the blade is for offense. I came to know that a dagger properly wielded in the off-hand can deflect a blow or jab as effectively as a shield. I also learned how to fight and defend myself with my bare hands.

Though I was gifted with great speed of hand since birth, Anu'Serr saw room to grow. To increase my fighting speed, he had me practice sparring in heavy mail armor. When I fought as fast as I could, Anu'Serr would remove the armor, and my speed increased dramatically. It was through this practice that I began to rival some of the elves at Quel'Danil in fighting speed. I later learned why Anu'Serr trained me in this way- as a ranger and forest hunter, I would wear armor made of thick leather rather than heavy steel. To compensate for the difference, he taught me to be fast. He told me that in many situations, greater speed would compensate for stronger armor or weapons. I began to prefer using two swords in battle, using one to protect and one to attack as necessary.
Anu'Serr helped me improve my marksmanship. He taught me how to breathe just right so as to make the steadiest shot. I learned how to lead a moving target, and how where to strike a foe to bring it down in one shot. Anu'Serr even taught me to make my own bow and arrows, though it took me several tries to make one that seemed less a tool and more an extension of myself.

Each year, as I returned home to my family, they would comment on how different I was, how much older I seemed. I felt older, older than I thought I should feel for a boy still considered a youth. My biggest fear during those years was that I was growing away from my family, that I would become a stranger to them. But each time I was home, Father assured me that he and Mother loved me, were proud of me, and knew I was where I was supposed to be.

*Only later did I learn that Father had a dream while we were at the lodge. In it he had seen me as a man, dressed not in armor wielding a mighty sword or hammer like a paladin, but standing in the trees, apart from him, Mother and Katia. He told his dream to Mother, who said she had a feeling that same night that my destiny would take me along a different path than my father, herself, or even my sister. Father told me later than when I told them, even in my adolescent and boyish inexperience, that I wanted to be like an elf hunter, they both understood that this seemed to be the path that my life was to take.

Jalinde Summerdrake, Captain of Quel'Danil (from wowwiki.com)

Friday, April 3, 2009

The Main Character- A History, Part I: Childhood

My name is Nikolas Altus Tien. I don't know exactly why I am writing this, a brief account of my life thus far. I do know that the idea to do such came to my mind as I traveled from Hearthglen two days past, and has been on my thoughts so strongly that I think I won't be rid of the thought until I do something about it.

Stormwind City (from wowwiki.com)

I was born two years before the Horde first came to Azeroth. My father, Altus, was a priest serving at the Northshire Abbey, and my mother Naya stayed at home with me. She used to be a sorceress in training at Dalaran, until she met and married my father.

I don't remember the start of the First War, when the Horde came through the Dark Portal and invaded the kingdom. I was only two then, when Father went away to war. But I do remember when he came back and told us we'd have to leave out home. It was four years later, and my mother had given birth to my little sister, Katia, while Father was gone. Mother gathered me and Katia while Father packed what he could into a small handcart, and we left Northshire and headed to the keep at Stormwind. But the Horde couldn't be stopped, and it wasn't long before we had to leave the keep for the sea, cramming into boats that would take us away from the invading Orcs. We sailed north as the Horde burned all that we loved and knew. I was only six, but I remember the sadness and how cold it was on the seas.

We arrived on the southern shores of Lordaeron, where we sought refuge. I remember seeing Lord Lothar, our leader, leaving for the capital city to inform the Lordaeron king of the Orc threat. As for us, Father took us north to Alterac, to seek shelter and provision from my maternal grandfather. He was a noble of that small kingdom, and would have plenty of room for us until we could find something more permanent. But I remember that our welcome was colder than even the sea itself. I learned later that he was angry at my mother for marrying my father. He held the idea of nobility in high esteem, and felt Mother was betraying her noble heritage by marrying someone who wasn't even from Alterac and was a humble priest.

Two things stand out about that day. The first was the way my grandfather beat my mother in front of us for turning her back on her heritage. He hit her face three times, called her an ingrate, accused her of betraying her family, stared burning hatred at her. The second thing was the pure fury I saw in Father's eyes as he stood watching, restrained by grandfather's guards, powerless to do anything.

At least, I thought him powerless at the time. The guards were big, what could he do? As I got older, I started to think that maybe he could have done something. After all, he was a priest who wielded the holy power of the Light. Could he not have called on that power to intervene and protect Mother? I felt anger at him for standing by. I began to see him as a coward, as weak, and began to distance myself from him. It was mainly for that reason that I chose to spend much of my time in the Hinterlands hunting with and learning from the elves. Well, that's getting ahead of myself.

It took a number of years for me to realize that Father might have been trying to teach me something that day. I think he was showing by example that rage is only proper if it's restrained, that one should be careful how he acts, especially when he's angry. I feel now that if Father had lashed out, he might have done something that would haunt him forever. Further, if he had acted, the rest of us might have been further harmed by harsh retribution. And so I began to respect his inaction that day.

Angry, wounded and saddened, we returned to Southshore, where we found shelter with a kind old sheep farmer and his wife. Their children had grown and moved to Brill, so they had ample room for us. Father was called to war a second time, for after destroying Stormwind, the Horde had turned its attention northward. This time, though, Father joined a new order of holy warriors called paladins. They had the same ability to wield the power of the Light, while possessing the martial skills of mighty warriors. Their order came to be known as the Knights of the Silver Hand. Mother, Katia and I stayed behind in Southshore. While I helped the old man with the farm, Mother and Katia aided the war effort by sewing the sheep's wool into bandages to send to the soldiers.

The war was relatively short- Father came home about a year later. He announced we would be moving north where his dwarf friend, Dobrin Hammerstone, lived with his clansmen. Father met Dobrin while he performed diplomatic duties for Northshire before he was married. The two crossed paths several times, and Father tells me they became fast friends. By chance they had ended up in the same company during the Second War. Dobrin invited Father to take us to the Hinterlands, home of the Wildhammer dwarves, to which Dobrin's clan belonged. Father agreed, thinking it to be a quiet way to raise his family.

Father was right. We felt truly at peace in the Hinterlands. Father and Dobrin built a home for us in a valley several miles from Aerie Peak, the mighty Wildhammer city built into the side of a huge mountain. To suit our new home, the leader of the Paladins, Uther Lightbringer, assigned father to be the Silver Hand's diplomat to Aerie Peak. Whenever he as home with us, he took the opportunity to teach Katia and myself about the Light. Mother stayed at home with Katia and I, teaching us how to read and write, how to conduct ourselves, and about the magic she had learned during her training at Dalaran. I was more interested in Mother's magic (in part because of the anger I felt toward my father, as I mentioned before); Katia was always more inclined to Father's teachings about the Light and its power. Those inclinations would in part define our futures.

I happened upon the direction my life would take, not knowing that's what it would be. To the east of Aerie Peak, the powerful high elves of Quel'Thalas had established a hunting lodge. Enmity going back thousands of years existed between the elves and the forest trolls that inhabited the forests of Azeroth. Several troll tribes had settled in the Hinterlands, and the elves helped the dwarves keep them at bay. Neither side strove to great efforts to wipe out the others; to do so would have come at far too great a cost for both the ultimate winner and loser. So, they kept their territory and fought daily to keep the other side off of it.

In my eleventh year, we attended Brewfest, a traditional dwarven festival, at Aerie Peak. I entered an archery competition for the younger dwarves (who were still some 30-40 years my senior), and despite my youth, won somewhat handily. A high elf visiting from the hunting lodge came up to us and told us he was impressed with my skill. When my father introduced himself, the elf surprised us by saying he knew of my father. He explained that a number of the elves at the hunting lodge had fought in the same company as Father during the Second War. The elf, named Anu'Serr Stormshade, said his kinsmen spoke highly of Altus, and took us to meet a few of them who had also come to the festival. I remember how happy Father was to see them, and how glad they were in return. The only person outside of our family in whose presence Father seemed to be most happy was Dobrin. Father stayed and talked with his friends, while Mother, Katia and I enjoyed other parts of the festival. When Father joined us again, he told us we had been invited by the elves to visit the hunting lodge. Katia and I were so excited- we'd always been intrigued by the somewhat mysterious high elves, and now we would have the chance to see where and how they lived.

Aerie Peak (from wowwiki.com)