Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Shadow's Will, Chapter I

Northshire Valley

Nikolas Tien knew it was a losing battle, but he tried anyway to fight the tears welling up in his eyes. The first of them fell down his cheek as he knelt down to brush moss off the tombstone in front of him. It wasn’t difficult- the moss was soft and lightly attached, falling easily to the ground as Nikolas touched it. When he finished, he sat back on the grass beside the grave, barely able to read the name in the twilight:


Altus Galor Tien

Knight of the Order of the Silver Hand

Sacrificed his life defending the

Free people of Azeroth from the Scourge


It had been five years, almost to the day, since Nikolas’ father was killed at Darrowshire, keeping the Undead at bay while villagers and soldiers alike ran for their lives. Nikolas had tried to stay and help, but the look his father gave him said everything: that he needed Nikolas to make sure everyone got away safely, even if it cost Altus his life.

Nikolas had watched as that price was paid- an Abomination, a grotesque collection of body parts fused into a giant monstrosity, had knocked Altus into a wall with one swipe of its maul. When he didn’t see his father get up, Nikolas knew it was too late. It took every ounce of his will not to go running back, but he knew what his father expected him to do.

So he had run, like everyone else, fleeing the dark horror of the Scourge, fighting when necessary to survive. There hadn’t even been a chance to go back for his father’s body. His only solace at the time had come knowing he had done as Altus had asked, had fulfilled his father’s dying wish. But that comfort was short-lived, and the memories of that day had followed Nikolas and haunted his nightmares since.

The tombstone here at the Northshire Abbey had been placed at the request of Nikolas’ mother, Naya. Altus had trained to become a priest of the Holy Light here; he and Naya had been married in the chapel here; Nikolas and his sister, Katia, were born here. This was the place where the Tien family had hoped to call home. Those dreams were shattered when the Horde arrived.

Nikolas stood and wiped his eyes. This was the first time he’d come to Northshire, though his mother had invited him often. Nikolas had used his responsibilities on the merchant ship Queen’s Gambit as an excuse, but the truth was that he’d been avoiding his mother since Altus’ death. He had never been able to shake the feeling that his mother blamed him for not going back, for not even trying to save his father. Nikolas knew it was all probably in his head, but that didn’t make it any less difficult. Only in the realization that five years had passed already did Nikolas muster up the courage to come to Northshire.

With one last glance at the tombstone, standing over a grave with no body, Nikolas turned and walked toward the abbey, where the priests had graciously given him a room for the night. The inside of the abbey was nearly empty, populated only by the odd monk or priestess sitting in meditation or deep thought. Nikolas walked as quietly as he could so as not to disturb them.

Moonlight flowed into Nikolas’ room on the west side of the abbey as he walked in, taking his shows off and leaving them by the door. He dressed for bed, knowing this was much earlier than usual for him to go to sleep. Still, he felt tired, weighed down by the memory of his father’s death and the grief that came this time every year. As he laid his head to his pillow, he hoped that those memories wouldn’t invade his dreams, but knowing full well they probably would.


Alterac Mountains


Hundreds of miles away, far north of Northshire or Stormwind, driving rain obscured any moonlight that would have shone on the Alterac Mountains. It had been raining for three straight days now, and the man now huddled in a thick canvas tent again cursed whatever power or deity was responsible for such miserable weather.

He had been waiting here for two of those rainy days, high in the mountains where few would have dared go for any meeting, no matter how important. The man knew, though, that the remote location would ensure privacy, something he greatly valued as a purveyor of services considered by many to be less than savory. He cared little for popular opinions, however; he knew that while the efforts he led were illegal, they were of noble and fair intent. Like his colleagues, the man simply wanted to reclaim what had been taken from him unfairly.

A shout from outside told him his guest had arrived. He wrapped a thick cloak around his shoulders, pulled the hood over his head and stepped outside. Through the rain he could see his guards gathered at the head of the trail leading up to the small clearing, surrounded on three sides by high cliffs. Beyond them, the outline of a mounted rider was barely visible; the man watched as that rider dismounted and was escorted nearer by the guards. Both men then took seats below a canvas overhang attached to the host’s tent.

The newcomer had the look that would make all but those who lived in the dark places of society shiver. Rough stubble did little to hide the numerous scars covering the man’s face; his eyes moved about quickly, as if expecting an ambush at any moment; and his breath smelled strongly of dwarven ale. His half-open mouth showed broken and missing teeth, glistening half from rain, half from spittle. He had a wheezy kind of breathing, like he had run up the mountain rather than rode on a horse.

“You got my money?” the newcomer asked, his gravelly voice loud and abrasive against the constant sound of rain. His sneer made it even more clear than the question that he wanted to conclude business quickly.

“Show me what I’m willing to pay so much for first,” was the response, as terse and impatient as the man who had waited long for this transaction.

With a growl of irritation, the newcomer reached into his cloak. The guards surrounding him moved their hands, almost as one, to their swords, ready to draw and take action if this stranger tried anything dangerous. But all he pulled out from a pocket was a small box, wooden and aged, about the size of a fist.

“The money, if you please.” The man holding the box glared hard at the man he expected money from. But the buyer didn’t shrink.

“Open it. I need to see it if I’m to pay so handsomely for it.”

Grumbling again, the scruffy man opened the box and held it out for his buyer to see. To himself, he mused on why this trinket was of such interest. It was a simple ring, unadorned and hardly ornate, though clearly made of fine silver. The buyer, however, hoped the man holding the ring didn’t know what it was he held in his hands. If he did, he surely would ask for more, and the buyer was in no mood to bargain or haggle. He looked up at one of the guards.

“Give him the money,” he ordered. The guard pulled a pouch from under his cloak, bulging with silver coins. The newcomer’s eyes lit up with greed as he took the bag and felt how heavy it was. He got up to leave, but was pushed back down into his seat by the guard who had given him the money.

“Not just yet,” the buyer said, staring at the ring in his hands. “I need to be sure this is what I paid for.”

The newcomer spat. “It’s what you wanted, alright. I don’t like you questioning my honest nature like that.”

The buyer scoffed. “I’m certain you’ve never had an honest nature, now keep you mouth shut for a minute.”

The seller opened his mouth to protest, but looked around at the guards and thought better of it. Turning his attention back to his buyer, he saw the man take the ring from the box and weigh it in his hands. He then reached into his cloak, pulled something out and hold it up next to the ring: it was another ring, similar in shape but slightly darker in color. The seller’s breath caught in his chest- did the color difference mean the ring wasn’t what the other man wanted.? The buyer’s eyes narrowed as he turned back to his guest.

“You may go. I am satisfied you found what I wanted,” he said, waving his hand dismissively.

The seller got up quicker than he might normally have; something about his host suddenly unsettled him, and he wanted nothing more than to be far away right now. Gathering his cloak around him, he returned to his horse, got on and rode toward the mouth of the small clearing.

The buyer’s chief guard watched the scruffy man ride off. “That heavy purse will slow him down,” he said.

Turning back to the tent entrance, the boss gave a nod and went inside. As he settled onto his cot, he heard the sound of a bowstring being drawn and released, followed by a distant yelp of pain. He ignored all this however, his mind now singly upon his purchase. Holding the ring up to eye level again, he smiled. Months of searching and inquiring and poring over records had paid off. Finally, he was just one small step away from achieving that which he had set out two years ago to accomplish.

On that day, fate had dropped not one, but two unexpected surprises into his lap. A third came along some months later. Today, he had purchased the fourth piece of the puzzle, and he knew where the last one was.

And once it was in his hands, he would take back what was once his and more.

Friday, July 9, 2010

Shorts


New approach- rather than one big story, how about a bunch of little ones? Short stories, novellas, whatever you want to call them. Here are some ideas of stories I want to tell:

Let Live
  • Nikolas encounters a wounded troll east of Northdale. Despite long hostilities between humans and trolls, Nikolas finds himself wondering what to do in the situation.

The Cult
  • Nikolas helps a family escape from the Cult of the Damned in Northdale.

Torn
  • Nikolas escapes from the battle at Darrowshire after seeing his father cut down by the Scourge. He reunites with his mother at the Marris home to the northwest, where he tells her the bad news. Together they leave for Hearthglen, to regroup with other Alliance soldiers.

Misgivings
  • Nikolas discusses his suspicions about the Scarlet Crusade with Thalion. They talk about Lordaeron's fall at the hands of Arthas and the exodus west to Kalimdor.

Flight
  • Nikolas escapes from imprisonment by the Scarlet Crusade. He helps a small group of Undead, Forsaken, escape as well, killing three Crusaders in the process. When he arrives in Southshore, he learns a price has been put on his head. He buys passage on a merchant ship called the "Queen's Gambit, captained by high elf Valnara Wavecrest.

Rook's Gambit
  • Part I
    • The Queen's Gambit is attacked by Southsea Pirates east of Steamwheedle. Nikolas helps fend off the boarding pirates, then aids in disabling one of the ships, allowing the Queen to get away.
  • Part II
    • After deducing that captives taken in the battle are being held at Lost Rigger Cove, Nikolas leads a rescue party to save them.

Home Again
  • While the Gambit is docked in Stormwind Harbor, Nikolas visits his mother who is living in near the Tower of Azora. Together they visit the memorial to his father at Northshire Abbey. Naya gives Nikolas some of his father's mementos.

Enemy's Camp
  • While sailing to Silvermoon, Nikolas goes ashore in the Tirisfal Glades and sneaks into the Scarlet Monastery as a refugee. He meets with Katya and the two catch up. While talking, they argue about the Undead and how they are to be treated. Despite their differing opinions, they part amicably and promise to keep in touch through their mother.

The Long Road
  • Wanting to pass along some of his father's mementos on to Dobrin Hammerstone, Nikolas takes shore leave at Southshore. He joins a caravan traveling east, the members gathered to protect themselves against Syndicate bandits. Among them is a man named Marek, with whom Nikolas becomes fast friends. They find the road ahead isn't safe, despite the numbers of their group.

Shore Leave
  • This is a five-parter in which Nikolas reunites with his "second family" of sorts and finds them in difficult circumstances. He discovers there amy be more than just bad luck, however, and not just from one source.

So, tell me what you think. Do any of these stick out enough to where you'd want it before the others?

Let me know in the comments (in English or some discernable language, please).

Friday, June 11, 2010

Greek to Me

For what it's worth, I love getting comments. I particularly like comments that give feedback or constructive criticism about my writing.

Most of the recent comments on this blog are in an Asian language with which I'm not familiar. Heck, I'm not familiar with any kind of Asian language.

Thus, I have a request: if you are commenting in a language other than English or Russian, please let me know (in English) the language you are using, so I can translate your comment.

A disclaimer- if the comment turns out to be spam, trolling or garbage, it will be summarily deleted.

Thanks.

Friday, May 7, 2010

The purpose of this entry is two-fold. First, I want to let everyone know that the plot is coming together nicely, and I hope to be able to start publishing excerpts soon.

Second, I want to try this feature on Google Documents that let's me publish a document straight from the editor, rather than cutting and pasting and worrying about formatting. Let's see how this goes.

P.S. To the readers, thank you for your patience. It means a lot that you keep coming back here, and I'm sorry to have been a letdown recently.


UPDATE: It looks like it works pretty good. There's no headline, so I'll have to see if I can work that out.

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Flawed


I realized recently that Nikolas isn't flawed enough.

He's never been perfect, I never wanted him to be so. Such characters are annoying and very boring. Where's the fun if nothing is wrong? But I've struggled as to how Nikolas should be flawed. A recent post on WoW.com gave some interesting insight, that it might help to blame the character's imperfection on one of the common vices: Sloth, Greed, Vanity/Pride, Lust, Gluttony, Wrath or Envy. All present intriguing options, but at the end, I didn't like any of them. So where am I going with this? Well, I had an idea yesterday, one that has stuck and that I kind of like.

Nikolas is, at the beginning of the story, well on his way to becoming jaded.

His upbringing wasn't exactly idyllic- he and his family were driven by war to another land and he saw little of his father who was in the fighting- but it wasn't really hard either. From his pre-teen days, he spent his time training to be a wilderness scout. He spent his years mostly outdoors, which he enjoyed, and didn't have to face the test of actual fighting until he reached adulthood. Even then, he had the teachings of the Light, passed on by his father, to keep him believing in greater things that transcend pain and suffering.

Where his difficulties begin is when he makes choices based on his convictions, only to find those decisions challenged, ridiculed or criticized by those around him. The difficulty grows when one starts to consider the implications of that choice.

Imagine you're walking along the street when you see a man stumble in the middle of a crosswalk. Oncoming traffic has a green light, and a bus is speeding toward the fallen pedestrian. You do the heroic thing and push him out of the way, saving his life. That's a good thing, correct?

What if the man robs a bank later that day? What if he kills someone during that robbery? What if he goes on a crime spree that leaves death and destruction in its wake?

There could be a host of philosophical discussion concerning the rightness or wrongness of your decision to save the pedestrian (is it the act that makes it good or the result and so on), but think only of this: what would you think if those consequences happened? What would that do to your moral center, your sense of good and bad, right and wrong? Add to that criticism from peers about your decision and the results. Maybe once isn't so big you can't brush it off, but what if it happens several times? What then?

That's what Nikolas is going through at the beginning of the story. He tries to do the right thing, but more than once that has led to less-than-pleasant consequences, even life-threatening ones. So for him, is it worth it to continue trying to be the good guy? What if no one around you wants you to be the good guy?

Those are the thoughts I have right now. What do you think? Feel free to share in the comments section.

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Models to Follow

Yes, I know it's been more than four months. But I haven't been slacking off completely. Nikolas is a developing character, and I'm finding it time-consuming to try and hone down my ideas into the story I want to tell. So, that's still in progress.

In the meantime, let me share some Warcraft fan-fiction discoveries that I found truly enjoyable. There are good fan-fics and bad ones, and far too few of the former. But I found a couple that you might enjoy if you like this sort of thing:

Kuma's Song
- I'm not sure who wrote this, but it's very well-written. The tauren warrior Kuma is among the first to fight alongside the Horde in the Eastern Kingdoms, but finds the new war is not what it seems. He then discovers that a new path may be calling to him.

It's deep while simple, easy to follow while deep in its message. Worth the small amount of time.


Travels Through Azeroth and Outland - Destron, an Undead mage who can still pass for a living one, makes his way through and around the two worlds, cataloging his journey and finds and meetings.

Entertaining and painstakingly loyal to the world of Warcraft as it is.


Blood and Light - I haven't read a lot of this yet, but it has things that have interested me since I started playing WoW- the Plaguelands, the Scarlet Crusade, Stratholme, etc.


Okay, that's all for now- I'm putting these links in a list on the sidebar and will add as I find new gems. Hopefully some kind of update on my story will be up soon. Thanks for sticking around!

Friday, December 4, 2009

The Will of Darkness, Part I

What parts of Northdale might have looked like before the Legion invaded


"Brothers, tonight everything we've worked toward will be ours. All the promises we've been given will be fulfilled. The glory to which we all aspire is within our grasp, but you must do your duty this night."
James Grekov leaned on the table in front of him, staring intensely at each of the men (and a few women) gathered before him. The Wolf's Tooth Tavern was packed, each person fully dedicated to the same cause as the one next to him. Well, James thought, almost everyone was so dedicated. Standing tall again, he continued his speech.
"There may be some with doubts. Our calling is to bring every soul in this land to our Master, willing or otherwise. Many are your friends, and some are your family. They do not, will not understand what it is we do for them. But you know, as well as I know, that all may partake in the great future promised to us.
"Some will resist, but we must not give in. Some will fight back, but we must not falter. Some in this room may even lose their life this night, but take heart, my friends: such are blessed to be able to taste the glory for which we all strive. Such are the luckier of us, for their fate shall be sealed soon."
James slowly began adding volume and intensity to his voice. "But to those who survive, though we all wish for the sweet taste of death, that we may then taste life, I say this: we must live, so that others may die and be reborn. This is our calling, this is what our Master would have us do!
By now, James was practically shouting, speaking with as much fervor and zeal as he could muster. "Death will come to us all, my friends, but not yet. First, we must do our Master's's will this night, and then we may stand ready for the reward which is promised. Are you ready?"
The walls of the packed tavern shook with cries of support and affirmation. James couldn't help but smile as he saw dozens of men and women just like him, people willing, even desiring to lay down their lives for their Master, though none, not even James, had ever seen him. Oh, James thought, he was real enough. James had felt his power, had felt his embrace when he traded his soul for the promise of immortality. Some others here had similar experiences, but most were going on faith that what was to happen tonight was the right course of action.
Well, James promised each one of them silently, your faith will be rewarded. And soon.
With a final word he dismissed everyone from the tavern, each person knowing his or her assignment. Tonight, James mused, they would spread across the land like the darkness they had come to love, and by sunrise, Northdale and its surrounding farms would be covered in the blood of those not willing to submit to the will of darkness. Yes, blood would flow tonight, and James would drink it in; he would glut himself in a show of devotion to the One whom he served.
As he followed the driven crowds out of the tavern, James failed to notice that not everyone had left. A tall figure clad in dark clothes slipped from the shadows into the kitchen, and outside through the scullery.